Human Pilots, Strange Horizons

with narration by Anaea Lay

It’s up! I tried to write a space opera and this was the result. The published version features far less exposition in the beginning, a problem that I’m beginning to diagnose with my work in general. Lopping it off (like the first 1/4 of the story?) resulted in a faster opening, and hopefully a better reading experience.


One response to “Human Pilots, Strange Horizons”

  1. Shamefully Fake Avatar

    Trimming-off the excess seems to be a good idea, one with which I struggle.


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